Hello, Susan,

Attached is your letter with my comments.  This is well done.  I know you were skeptical 
about gaming, but you seemed to have found some that you see as beneficial.  This comes 
through in the letter.  Below is your grade on this assignment and the course.  Let me 
know if you have questions.

Letter Grade:  +15/15

Is the argument presented convincing?  The letter includes three clearly articulated and 
convincing reasons why a games/robotics club should be included. +5/5

Does the content incorporate the issues discussed in class and in the readings?  Content 
includes resources outside of those used in class, including student’s own experiences.  

+5/5

Does the argument show an understanding of concerns related to video games/robotics?  

Argument includes an acknowledgment of two concerns and why those concerns are or are 
not justified.  +5/5

Course Grade:  A

Nice job with the robot!

Debra R. Sprague

Associate Professor