ENGL 101
Section 90, Fall 2010
TR 10:30-11:45pm - Innovation Hall 323

Dr. Kenneth C. Thompson
Office:  Robinson A 405A
Office Phone:  703-993-2781
Office Hours: 
Tues/Thurs 4:30-5:30pm
and by appointment
Email:  kthomps4 [at] gmu.edu
Syllabus:  http://mason.gmu.edu/~kthomps4/101-90-f10/
Course Blog:  http://10190f10.wordpress.com/  
WRITING TUTORING:  The Transition Resource Center, University Life, and the Writing Center at GMU are sponsoring Living Learning Community tutoring especially for students in this and other LLC 1st year classes.  Our tutors--Mike Dupuy, Nya Jackson, and Shamama Moosvi--have been specially trained to help you with your writing as well as to work with you on peer review.  A flyer will be distributed to all Univ100 classes as well as the IT&E sections of Engl101.   You will need to bring back a signed visit verification form for all face-to-face tutoring visits and hand it in with your paper to receive credit for your visit.  Online tutoring will also be available; instead of a visit verification form you will hand in the emailed response from the tutor.  Each student is required to attend at least one tutoring session this semester.  See below for more details.  

 

TEXTS: 

COURSE BLOG:  Over the course of the semester, you will regularly post short writing assignments on the class blog.  The blog will be the place to post as a place to post personal reflections and your responses to readings and films as well as try out ideas for your more formal print papers while receiving feedback from your fellow students .  I will put instructions on the site and go over procedures in class.  If you have problems, please contact me.  The blog can be found at:  http://10190f10.wordpress.com (note no dashes in the URL)    

RESOURCES: 

COURSE FRAMEWORK:   This section of English 101 is specifically designed for students in Engineering and IT or for students especially interested in those subjects.  About half the class is also taking University 100 as part of the Information Technology and Engineering Living Learning Community (LLC).  University 100 is intended to help students transition from high school to college.  The main objectives of this course are to develop relationships with others in the class including the instructor and peer advisor, to establish a knowledge base of campus resources, and to acquire basic academic skills for success.  Engl101 will enable you to improve your writing and research skills while you study the history of electrification in 19th century America and the development of computers in the mid 20th century as well as popular images of science and technology.  In your English course, you will regularly post short essays on the class blog, and comment on each others longer papers using editing sheets I will prepare for each assignment.  You will also be required to do exercises from Diana Hacker's Pocket Style Manual website keyed to my comments on your writing.   

WRITING TUTORS:  Mike Dupuy, Nya Jackson, and Shamama Moosvi all have excellent writing skills and have been trained as peer tutors by the Writing Center.  They will be available at specified times to help you with your papers.  They will have hours in an office in the reference room of Fenwick Library and will also be available for online (OWL) tutoring sessions from 9-17 to 9-28.  For instructions on registering for OWL sessions click here.  For their hours starting 9-29 click here.  Also see the  tutoring flyer distributed to LLC Univ100s.  If you see them in person, you will need to bring back a signed visit verification form and hand it in with your paper to receive credit for your visit.  Each student is required to attend one OWL tutoring session this semester and will receive extra credit (specified below for papers 2 &3) for an additional visit.  Tutors are also available at The Writing Center Robinson Hall A, room 114 (703) 993-1200.  Make both face-to-face and online writing tutor appointments online at http://writingcenter.gmu.edu  You will have to register as clients in the system and then go the LLC ONLY drop-down menu to schedule your appointments with one of the Freshman Center tutors (or LLC ONLY OWL for online sessions) .    Note: make sure to bring a print copy of your assignment, paper/draft and other materials you want to work on with you when you visit Mike, Nya or Shamama.  

REQUIREMENTS: 1) Regular attendance. Participation in all class activities including workshops, group projects, films, trips and individual presentations. 2) Completion of all assigned reading. 3) On-time completion of all written work including papers, blog posts, editing sheets, quizzes, papers, bibliographies, and proposals. After three late assignments, each succeeding late project will be lowered half a grade. I will accept no assignments that are over one week late. All assignments are due at the beginning of class on the day indicated on the syllabus.  Students who do not earn a "C" or higher will receive the grade "NC" (No Credit) and are required to take Engl101 again.

FILM SCREENINGS:  There will be three required Cinema and Supper showings with free pizza and soda at 7pm and a film at 7:30pm.  The films are scheduled as follows: 

NOTE ON PLAGIARISM:  The English Department defines plagiarism as "using the exact words, opinions, or factual information from another source without giving that source credit. Writers give credit through the use of accepted documentation styles, such as parenthetical citation, footnotes, or end notes; a simple listing of books, articles, and websites is not sufficient. Plagiarism is the equivalent of intellectual robbery and cannot be tolerated in an academic setting."  I will not tolerate plagiarism in my classes and will report incidents to the appropriate authorities.   

DISABILITIES:  If you are a student with a disability and you need academic accommodations, please see me and contact the Office of Disability Resources at 703.993.2474. All academic accommodations must be arranged through that office.

PRINTING IN INNOVATION HALL:   to use the printers outside the lab on the third floor of Innovation Hall, you will need to add money to your Mason ID card for printing by going to http://masonmoney.gmu.edu and clicking on the link “Buy Online.” On the next page, click “Deposit Online Now” at the top. On the next page that opens, enter your G number and your pin. If you have never used the site before, your pin is 1111. You can then use a credit card to add Mason Money to your ID.  

SHORT PAPERS:  33%
LONG PAPERS:  33%
PARTICIPATION AND GROUP WORK (including blog posts):  33%

SCHEDULE (SUBJECT TO REVISION)

DATE ENGL 101
Tues Aug 31 Introduction to the course; fill out the class Information Sheet and bring it to class on Thurs.  Set up mail forwarding at Mason Live if you do not plan to check your GMU email several times a week.  This week I will also help you add my email addresses to your safe list so messages about the class will not be blocked by GMU's spam filter.  You should also create a course folder in your Mason Live account so you can easily locate course related messages.   

In addition, this week, 1) you will register on Wordpress.com; 2) I will give you write permissions on the class blog; 3) you will introduce yourself to your fellow students; and 4) you will comment on each other's postings.  The instructions for the assignment are at page/prompt 03 on the upper right of the class blog; instructions for registering and posting are at page/prompts 02a and 02b as well as below.  The full registration procedure is time consuming so after you have registered on Wordpress.com and while you are waiting for me to give you register you on the class blog, you should do you initial draft of your introduction using Word (saving as web page filtered) or an HTML editor.  Once I have given you write permissions on the blog and created the appropriate categories for you to check, you can transfer what you have to the blog, continue working, and even edit your post.   

When you register on Wordpress.com, use your GMU user name and email address and write down your password (or use one you will remember).  Leave Gimme a blog unchecked.  How much information you include in your profile (the next page of Wordpress registration) is up to you; I recommend including just your first name and last initial. After you have filled out the profile page, click submit and open your GMU email account and wait for an email from Wordpress.  Click the authentication link in the email and notify me that you are registered on Wordpress.  I will then give register you on the class blog (you must be registered on both Wordpress and the class blog before you can log on and see the New Post link). 
 
Give your first post a title–“03-Introduction, first name last initial,” and enter the text of your post in the box under Post.  You should see a check box with your name under People at the top right of the Write page as one of the categories.  Also check Introductions (for your first post) before you click on Publish.  You will follow this procedure in future posts except that you will chose different titles and check different categories to correspond to the assignment.  If you do not check these categories, you will not receive credit for the assignment. 

The login link for the course blog is at the lower right of the page under Meta.  There is also a link to wordpress.com there.   

Thurs Sept 2 Class blog posting and commenting continued. 

Introduction to Edison, his inventions and the War of the Currents. We will watch selections from Edison:  Miracle of Light during class.      
Mon Sept 6 LABOR DAY, UNIVERSITY CLOSED
Tues Sept 7 Before class, read Jill Jonnes, Empires of Light, Introduction (xiii-xiv) and pp. 17-49 (Endeavor to Make it Useful).  This chapter covers the history of electricity and we will come back to it several times over the next few weeks.  We will go over the reading in some detail and then watch the sections on Faraday from Einstein's Big Idea (DVD chap 3 and part of 5).  The chapter is also currently available on You Tube in two clips, Part I and Part II
Thurs Sept 9 Before class, read Empires of Light, pp. 3-15 (Morgan's House Was Lighted Up Last Night); pp.  51-85 (Thomas Edison: The Wizard of Menlo Park); and pp. 347-353 (Edison's later career).   I will also discuss Edison using Paul Israel's Edison:  A Life of Invention (not assigned) pp. 119 & 167 and Empire of Light, p. 67. 

How did Faraday's motor work?  During class, you will look at the Magnet Lab demo and come up with an explanation of how the device worked in groups of 3-4.  Then decide whether you want to focus on and detailed technical explanation or a fund raising pitch to non-specialists and make a presentation to the class.  

If there is time, we will watch selections from a DVD of the interview with Jill Jonnes on CSPAN Booknotes.  The low bandwidth version of the interview is available online at http://www.booknotes.org/Program/?ProgramID=1751  If we don't get to the interview, watch it on your own after class; also read Edison's Story from the Lemelson Center at  http://invention.smithsonian.org/centerpieces/edison/ 
Tues Sept 14

Before class review Jonnes on Edison (51-85) and re-read the section from the end of Empires of Light on Edison's later work (347-353).  Then review the following resources for information and ideas about Edison's inventions:  

Then put together an account of what you consider to be Edison's most important invention with a description and your view of why it was important.  Post your account to the blog before class (see page/prompt 04).  During class, you will comment on at least two of your fellow students' posts and work on your paper while I talk to you about your plans and ideas.   

Intro to in-text citations in MLA format using Diana Hacker's Research and Documentation online site

SEPT 14-LAST DAY TO DROP WITH NO TUITION PENALTY, LAST DAY TO ADD CLASSES
Thurs Sept 16

Paper #1:  two print copies of a 2 page draft (typed & double spaced) of a paper on Edison's most important invention due at the beginning of class.  The final paper is dues on Thurs Sept 30th.  You are required to see tutor and revise the paper.  TUTORING SIGN UP and workshop on papers during class.        

Go to the Writing Center home page at http://writingcenter.gmu.edu/  In the box on the right hand side of the page, Schedule an Appointment, click on New Client and fill in the registration form and submit.  Then go back to the Schedule an Appointment box and click on Existing Client. Read and accept the Writing Center Policy Agreement, checking the box near the bottom of the page. 

Then log on using your GMU email address and password choosing LLC Students Only, OWL Location Fall 2010.    Open times are marked in white.  Click on Next Week at the bottom right to move forward in time. Click on a time that fits your schedule and fill in the form and click on Save Appointment after filling out the form completely.  The paper is a historical argument based on course reading and some research.  The audience is made up of educated non-specialists, although you can use technical terms and explanations in your account of how the invention works as long as you explain those technical terms.  The assignment is due Sept 30th and you must see a tutor by Sept 28th.  Give the tutor permission to share session content with your professor.   The paper you work on with the tutor will be your second draft.   I will send you and updated  assignment sheet tomorrow for you to submit when you send in your paper. 

For instructions on OWL procedures (including registering and signing up for an appointment), click on Locations (third tab from the left at the top of the WC home page) and go to the bottom on the page.  Click on Online Writing Lab and  instructions will appear for scheduling an OWL appointment and submitting your paper.  Also on the WC home page, at the bottom of the right hand box titled Schedule an Appointment, is a link to an instructional video.  See the LLC OWL specific instructions at http://mason.gmu.edu/~kthomps4/101-90-f10/owl-instructions.htm   

If there is time, we will watch more of Edison Tech in class.   

Tues Sept 21

At the beginning of class, I will go over how to use Lexis-Nexis Academic and ProQuest Research Library to find newspaper articles.  After we review the use of each database, you will look for an article on Edison entitled The Father of Invention by Debra Galant from the New York Times, June 1st, 1997.  Once you have found the article, read up to the section "Nationally Revered But Locally Ignored" and email the piece to yourself. 

Review of LLC OWL instructions at http://mason.gmu.edu/~kthomps4/101-90-f10/owl-instructions.htm  Then log on and check your appointment to make sure you registered under the LLC Students Only, OWL Location Fall 2010 drop down and have an appointment with Mike, Shamama or Nya.  Also write down your appointment time.  Failure to miss an appointment in the future will require two tutoring sessions and a paper on the difference between online and face-to-face tutoring (an extra credit assignment for others).  Missing appointments in the future will also lower you class participation grade.   

Review of citation formats using Diana Hacker's companion website and your writing handbook.  If there is time, we will watch selections from Edison Tech from 25:12 to 50 min.         

SEPT 21-LAST DAY TO DROP WITH 33% TUITION PENALTY
Thurs Sept 23

Conferences and workshop on paper drafts.  Bring your second print copy to class as well as an electronic copy of your draft so far. 

For additional information on Edison's inventions, see
http://edison.rutgers.edu/inventions.htm

Fri  Sept  24th

Edison The Man (1940) at the Eisenhower multimedia Theatre.  Pizza at 7pm in the lounge across from the front desk; film showing in the theatre at 7:30pm. 

By Sun at 11:59pm, post a comparison of Edison as presented in Empires of Light Edison:  Miracle of Light, Edison Tech, and Edison The Man  on the class blog at http://10190f10.wordpress.com/  Be sure to include what you learned from the documentaries and Jonnes, what interested you most in Edison’s story, and how Edison is portrayed in the Hollywood film.  Conclude by writing about the personal and professional qualities seen as essential to his success and how the process of discovery is represented in Edison The Man. 

Tues Sept 28

Read Empires of Light, pp.  117-124 and 129-139 (George Westinghouse).  Review pp. 123 and 130-132 especially carefully.  In preparation for your next paper, look over the following resources on Westinghouse:   

In-class discussion of the reading, group discussion of how transformers work and how Westinghouse improved the Gaulard Gibbs design, and individual posting following page/prompt 06, How Transformers Work. 

Our study of Tesla will be moved till later in October to go with Professor Bernard Carlson's lecture.  I am therefore moving up the assignments on Westinghouse and the War of the Currents; we will jump over the sections in Jonnes on Tesla and read them later. 
Thurs Sept 30

Paper #1 due at the beginning of class. 

Voting on best accounts of how transformers work (see page/prompt 6). 
To see what a technically detailed explanation by a physicist can look like, see Electricity  &  Magnetism, Walter Lewin, MIT Lecture 24 (21min- Transformers; 32min- coils) 
http://ocw.mit.edu/courses/physics/8-02-electricity-and-magnetism-spring-2002/video-lectures/embed24

If there is time, we will watch selections from a DVD of the interview with Jill Jonnes on CSPAN Booknotes.  The low bandwidth version of the interview is available online at http://www.booknotes.org/Program/?ProgramID=1751

OCT 1-LAST DAY TO DROP, LAST DAY TO DROP WITH 67% TUITION PENALTY
Tues Oct 5 Read Empires of Light, pp.  141-152 and 165-179 (Edison Declares War; Constant Danger).

In-class discussion and blog posting(page/prompt 7) on Brown's role in Edison's public relations campaign against AC.  Finish post #7 before next class. 

For extra-credit on paper #2 (or later, on paper #3), schedule a face-to-face meeting with a tutor from the Writing Center to go over a draft of a print copy of your paper and substantially revise the paper.  Also write an account of what you went over in your tutoring session, what you changed as a result, and what you see as the advantages and disadvantages of online (OWL) vs. face-to-face tutoring.  For paper #2, the session must be held between Oct 7th and Oct 18th.  To receive credit, you must include all print drafts as well as a visit verification form.   

Thurs Oct 7 Before class, read Empires of Light, pp.  198-204 (the PR struggle over the electrocution of a Western Union lineman in The Horrible Experiment) and begin the preliminary draft of paper #2 following page/prompt 8 on the blog.  Imagine you are either Edison or Westinghouse (or one of their allies or even a NYC regulator) and enter a post to the class blog in the form of a letter to one of the New York papers on the Western Union lineman case and the safety of AC and DC.  You will update your post before class on Oct 14th after you have read the exchange between Edison and Westinghouse in the North American Review.   

During class we will review how to use ProQuest Research Library.  Find the Oct 12th, 1889 New York Times article on Feeks' electrocution--"Met Death in the Wires."  Read the article and email it to yourself for future use.  You will then have time in class to work on blog post #8 while I talk to you about how you plan to approach the assignment.  Complete your post by Sun Oct 10th at 11:59pm.  By Tues Oct 12th at 11:59pm, comment on at least two of your fellow students' posts on Brown and two on Feeks' electrocution (#7 and 8). 

If there is time at the end of class, I will discuss Edison by going over some key sections of Empire of Light that point to simplifications in the film Edison The Man that have their roots in Edison's own manipulation of the press in the 19th century:   

  •  pp. 55-6 on Edison's showmanship
  • pp. 57-8 on Edison's "playing the unschooled hick"
  •  pp. 73-4 on Edison's lobbying NYC Aldermen
  • pp. 77-78 on his association with the Gold Indicator Co.  
Tues Oct 12 NO CLASS--COLUMBUS DAY OCT 11TH, MON CLASSES MEET TUES, TUES CLASSES DO NOT MEET

By Tues Oct 12th at 11:59pm, comment on at least two of your fellow students' posts on Brown and two on Feeks' electrocution (#7 and 8). 
Thurs Oct 14 Before class, read the exchange between Edison and Westinghouse from the North American Review (see the paper #2 assignment for the links).  Then update your post on Western Union lineman John Feeks' death from electrocution, drawing on the exchange between Westinghouse and Edison as well as the NY Times article on his death and your reading in Jonnes.  Follow the lineman's death prompt on the blog (page/prompt 8).  During class you will comment on the arguments and use of evidence of at least two of your fellow students' posts while I talk to you individually about your papers.   

For paper #2, you will write a 2-3 pages (typed and double spaced) revision of your letter to the New York papers on the Western Union lineman case and the safety of AC and DC. 

Tues Oct 19

Paper #2 due at the beginning of class.  The paper should be 2-3 pages, typed and double-spaced, and include in-text cites and a works cited page.  Make sure you draw on (and cite) the exchange between Westinghouse and Edison from the North American Review, the Oct 12th 1889 New York Times article, "Met Death in the Wires," and your reading in Jonnes.  

You may also want to take a learn about the "barehanding" of high voltage transmission lines if you are going to write from the future in support of Westinghouse.  See the video at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9QJGXln1lE  and use ProQuest Research Library to find a Sept 7th, 2010 article by Kafia Hosh from the Washington Post entitled Barehanding Technique Allows Power-line Repair Crews to Work with Live Wires

We will watch Tesla:  Master of Lighting in class.   

Thurs Oct 21 Before class read Empires of Light, pp. 87-115 (Nikola Tesla:  Our Parisian).   We will discuss both the reading and the documentary we watched on Tues.  We will also go over the assignment for paper #3.   

During or after class, review Jonnes 87-115 and read pp. 353-367 (Tesla's later career); begin your post on what you consider to be Tesla's most important invention with a description of how it worked (or might have worked) and your view of why it was important.  The post (page/prompt 9) is due by Sun at 11:59pm.  You should comment on at least two of your fellow students' posts before class next Tues.  You may find the following sites informative and interesting as you prepare your post: 

OCT 22--MIDTERM PROGRESS REPORT DUE
Tues Oct 26 Before class, read Empires of Light, pp.153-163 and 179-183.  During class review carefully pp. 153-163 and post to the blog an account of Tesla's lecture to the American Institute of Electrical Engineers in 1888 (page/prompt 10).  Make sure you explain the importance of polyphase AC in Tesla's induction motor.  Also indicate why Westinghouse purchased Tesla's patents and difficulties Tesla had working with Westinghouse Engineers and commercializing his design.  

During or before class next Tues, you will use the blog's comment function to vote on:  1) which account is the most technically correct and comprehensive; 2) which account is the most accessible and understandable to non-engineers; and 3) which account is the best mix of the two. 

Sign-up for lunch with Professor Carlson on Thursday. 

Thurs Oct 28 Bernard Carlson visit to our class.  Before our meeting, post to the blog two questions you would like to ask Professor Carlson on Tesla's inventions, his methods, and any other point that interests you (page/prompt 11). 

Professor Carlson has also agreed to have lunch with IT&E Engl101 and LLC students in the Nguyen Engineering Building, room 4201 from 12-145pm.        


OCT 29-INCOMPLETE WORK FROM s10 AND sum10 DUE TO INSTRUCTOR
Tues Nov 2 Bring a 2-3 page typed and double spaced draft of Paper #3 (on Tesla) to class for required for in-class exchange and editing by a fellow student.   The editing sheet you will use is tied to the grading rubric for the assignment.  A revision of the paper is due Nov 4th, but you can have an extension till Nov 11th if you see a tutor.  All tutoring sessions must be completed by Nov 9th. 

Make sure you read Nikola Tesla and the Business of Invention or watch Tesla in New York (You Tube 7:30 min-) before you write your draft.   You will need to study and cite these and other sources--in addition to Jonnes--in your revised paper.   See the listing for Oct 21st above, including the interview Tesla and Innovation.   

To cite Carlson's lectures (Madrid and GMU), follow the model at http://dianahacker for lectures but add "Web" for the online source; for the On Point interview, follow the Hacker model for radio interview but also add "Web" for online access.  For Tesla Master of Lightning, follow the model for Radio or Television program but add VHS.    

NOTE:  Priority registration for my Spring 2011 English 202 (Images of Science and Technology in Literature, Film and Popular History) is Nov 12th for 1st year students in this class and the IT&E LLC.  The class meets the General Education literature requirement and should be of special interest to students in Engineering and IT.  To register, call the Transition Resource Center at 703-993-9082 or email Jackie Nash at jhilldru@gmu.edu  Make sure to give your full name, indicate that you are currently a student in the IT&E LLC, and include your G number. 
Thurs Nov 4 Paper #3 due at the beginning of class.   If you are handing in your paper today, make sure to bring the editing sheet your fellow student filled out Tues as well as the draft they edited and a statement of what you changed as you revised the paper.  As with your last papers, put the revised paper on top and secure the portfolio with a clip or put it in a folder. 

If you see a tutor from the Writing Center, you can turn in the revised paper on Thurs Nov 11th.  Include all drafts with comments and editing sheets.  If you see a tutor, include a visit verification form (for face-to-face meetings) or the tutors email and comments and a detailed statement of what you went over during your session and what you changed as a result of the feedback you received.  Your tutoring appointment must take place by Tues Nov 9th so make sure to schedule it ahead of time.  See the tutoring flyer for instructions on availability and making an appointment.   


For extra-credit on paper #3 (as on paper #2), schedule a face-to-face session and write an account of what you see as the advantages and disadvantages of online (OWL) vs. face-to-face tutoring. 

I will return your last papers in class and meet with you individually while you are working on your new papers so make sure to bring the materials you need for paper #3 to class.  If you are handing in your paper today, bring earphones and watch Douglas Engelbart 1968 demonstration.  
Fri Nov 5 The Prestige (2006) at the Blue Ridge Theatre.  Pizza at 7pm; film showing in the theatre at 7:30pm. 

By Sun at 11:59pm, post a comparison of Tesla as presented in
The Prestige with what you know about Tesla from Empires of Light (pp. 87-115, 153-163, 179-183, and 353-367), the documentary Tesla:  Master of Lighting, Carlson's Nikola Tesla and the Business of Invention and/or Tesla in New York, and your own research.  See page/prompt 12 at http://10190f10.wordpress.com/       
Tues Nov 9 During  class on Tues Nov 9th, we will watch The Machine That Changed the World, Part I Great Brains On Thurs we will watch Part 2.  Take notes during both classes and post to the blog your thoughts on why the development of computers was an important technical and social achievement.  Then write an account of four of the most important figures, ideas or devices in this series of inventions (two for Part I and two for Part III), giving the reasons why you think your choices are noteworthy (page/prompt 13).  You will need postings for both Part I and Part II (which we will see on Thurs) of the documentary, although you can combine them in one post with a heading for each part.  You posts must be completed by Sun at 11:59pm. 
Thurs Nov 11 During  class on Tues Nov 9th, we will watch The Machine That Changed the World, Part I Great Brains On Thurs we will watch Part 2.  Take notes during both classes and post to the blog your thoughts on why the development of computers was an important technical and social achievement.  Then write an account of four of the most important figures, ideas or devices in this series of inventions (two for Part I and two for Part III), giving the reasons why you think your choices are noteworthy (page/prompt 13).  You will need postings for both Part I and Part II (which we will see on Thurs) of the documentary, although you can combine them in one post with a heading for each part.  You posts must be completed by Sun at 11:59pm. 

To see an interesting anticipation of one recent trend in interface design--Microsoft Kinect--see the clip from Spielberg's 2002 film Minority Report at  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NwVBzx0LMNQ   

Revised Paper #3 due if you saw a tutor.   Include a visit verification form (for face-to-face meetings) or the tutors email and comments and a detailed statement of what you went over during your session and what you changed as a result of the feedback you received.  For extra-credit on paper #3 (as on paper #2), schedule a face-to-face session and write an account of what you see as the advantages and disadvantages of online (OWL) vs. face-to-face tutoring. 

NOTE:  Priority registration for my Spring 2011 English 202 (Images of Science and Technology in Literature, Film and Popular History) is Nov 12th for 1st year students in this class and the IT&E LLC.  The class meets the General Education literature requirement and should be of special interest to students in Engineering and IT.  To register, call the Transition Resource Center at 703-993-9082 or email Jackie Nash at jhilldru@gmu.edu  Make sure to give your full name, indicate that you are currently a student in the IT&E LLC, and include your G number. 


Extra Credit:  Read ENIAC:  The Triumphs and Tragedies of the World's First Computer, pp. 28-139.  Also look at von Neumann's First Draft of a Report on the EDVAC. Begin your paper with an account of the struggle between Eckert/Mauchly and Brained (97-100) and between Eckert/Mauchly and von Neumann (114-128).  Conclude your paper by explaining who you think was most responsible for the architecture of modern programmable computers and why.  Paper due first class after Thanksgiving.   
Fri Nov 12 Tron (1982) at Blue Ridge.  Pizza at 7pm in the conference room; film showing in the theatre at 7:30pm. 

By Sun at 11:59, post to the blog your reactions to the film (page/prompt 14). 

If you miss the film showing, in addition to the blog post, write a 1-2 page paper (typed and double spaced with a work- cited page) for next Tues on how the Tron's vision of computing compares with some of the ideas and developments covered in The Machine That Changed the World.   NOTE:  You can do this assignment for extra-credit if you attended the film. 
 
Tues Nov 16 Read Michael Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning: Xerox PARC and the Dawn of the Computer Age, pp. xix-xxvii and 163-177 (the Alto).   Also read pp. 10-20 and 40-51 (Bob Taylor).  

Read Hacker, pp. 1-2 (wordy sentences).  We will go over the samples in class and do the online exercises next class. 
Thurs Nov 18 Read Michael Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning: Xerox PARC and the Dawn of the Computer Age, pp. 54-67 and watch Engelbart's 1968 demo.  See the clips at http://sloan.stanford.edu/MouseSite/1968Demo.html (watch 1-14). 

Group work on Xerox Parc and posting (page/prompt 16) on the following questions:  1) Why was the Alto important; 2) what technical difficulties did the designers have to surmount; 3)  why was it so popular at Parc, even among skeptics, once people saw it; 4) What were Bob Taylor's contributions to the development of interactive computing and networking; 5) What did Alan Kay learn from Bill English after Jerry Elkind shot down his original proposal for 30 mini-coms; 6) How was Alan Kay different than Kevin Flynn in Tron?  Were there villains at Parc comparable to Dillinger and Master Control?  

Online exercises on wordiness at Diana Hacker's online site  Do exercises 1-1 to 1-3 under Grammar Exercises and Clarity. 
Thurs Nov 18

On Thursday November 18th there will be a Living Learning Community event at the Rave Cinema in Fairfax Corners (11900 Palace Way Fairfax, VA 22030).  The Office of Student involvement (101 Student Union Building I ) is selling tickets to the premier of the next Harry Potter movie, Deathly Hollows for $8 a ticket ($10 with transportation).  These tickets are Cash Only and are available until they sell out.  Seating begins at 10:30pm.  Buses will leave the Sandy Creek deck every 15 minutes beginning at 10pm.  The extra-credit post for this assignment (page/prompt 15) is to post a comparison of at least two elements in Deathly Hollows and The Prestige, which you wrote about two weeks ago.  Your post should be 250 words and is due by Sun Nov 21st at 11:59pm.  

Tues Nov 23 Read Michael Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning, pp. 81-96 & 211-228 (Alan Kay).   Over break read:  314-328  (Alan Kay and LRG's Notetaker vs. CSG's Dorado. Also over break read pp. 329-345 and 423-4 (Steve Jobs' visit to Xerox Parc).   By Sun at 11:59 post to the blog your thoughts on Alan Kay's most important contribution(s) to the development of the personal computer (page/prompt 17).     

See Alan Kay's history of computer interfaces, Doing with Images Creates Symbols, part 1 at
http://www.archive.org/details/AlanKeyD1987  (Dynabook and Parc starts at 26:35 min)

Also see Space War:  Fanatic Life and Symbolic Death Among the Computer Bums and
The Graphical User Interface Gallery for Xerox at
http://toastytech.com/guis/indexxerox.html
Thurs Nov 25 THANKSGIVING RECECSS NOV 24-28
Tues  Nov 30 Read Michael Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning: Xerox PARC and the Dawn of the Computer Age, pp. 329-345 and 423-4 (Steve Jobs' visit to Xerox Parc).  Also read pp. 314-328  (Alan Kay and LRG's NoteTaker vs. CSG's Dorado.   We will discuss Steve Jobs' visit on Thurs along with Hiltzik's account of the development of the laser printer.   

During class, review Hiltzik pp. 314-328 and read Alan Kay's Design Summary of the NoteTaker-2 .  Then write a memo to George Pake, the Director of Parc, about why Xerox should fund the development of a small personal computer like the NoteTaker.  Make sure to include an account of the purpose/uses of the device, its design, and at least four potential markets.   One approach you could take is to do some in-class research on the i-Pad and write a memo from the future to on why Xerox should develop the NoteTaker.  Post your memo to the blog (page/prompt 18) before next class.  In class on Thurs you will vote for:  1) the best memo for an audience of scientists and engineers; and 2) the best memo for an audience of business executives (two comments).   

At the end of class, we will review Hacker on balancing parallel ideas (pp. 5-6) and do grammar exercises 3-1 to 3-3 under Clarity at Diana Hacker's online site  We will also study how Alan Kay uses both numbered lists and parallel grammatical form in his Design Summary.  Both lists and parallelism are particularly useful when writing for busy people who need to take in information quickly.  

Thurs Dec 2 Before class, read Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning, pp.127-144 (laser printer).  Also review pp. 329-345 and 423-4 (Steve Jobs' visit to Parc).    

At the beginning of class you will vote on your fellow students' memo to George Pake on the NoteTaker (two comments).  Use the blog's comment function to vote for:  1) the best memo for an audience of scientists and engineers; and 2) the best memo for an audience of business executives (see page/prompt 18).  

We will then discuss Gary Starkweather's difficulties convincing Xerox to market his invention in the context of the frequent claim that Xerox "blew it" (see the reading for next Tues) as well as Steve Jobs'  astonishment that Xerox had no plans to market the technology he saw during his visit to Parc.  If you want to listen to selections from Hiltzik, see the following:  Starkweather and the laser printer (Audible 1:59:51- ); Steve Jobs visit to Parc (Audible 4:38:31 to 4:53:20); Did Xerox Blow It (Audible 5:39:40 to 5:51:55).    

At the end of class we will review Diana Hacker on wordy sentences (pp. 2-3) and do grammar exercises 1-1 to 1-3 under Clarity at Diana Hacker's online site 
Tues Dec 7 Read Michael Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning: Xerox PARC and the Dawn of the Computer Age, pp. 389-398 (Did Xerox Blow It). 

Before class, post to the blog an account of Steve Jobs visit to Xerox Parc and your position on whether Xerox "blew it" (page/prompt 19).  Make sure to cover not only Xerox’s failure to develop a marketable Alto and NoteTaker and take advantage of the Smalltalk based interface the Learning Research Group developed but also consider Xerox’s eventual success with Ethernet and the laser printer. 

To introduce you to one of the options for Thurs reading as well as to highlight the importance of memos and other more formal kinds of writing at Xerox Parc, we will watch Bob Metcalfe talk on the History of Ethernet and look at two documents from the Ethernet Timeline:   1) Metcalfe's May 22nd Memo (click refresh page if the doc doesn't appear at first); and 2) Metcalfe and Boggs 1975 paper from the Association of Computing Machinery entitled Ethernet: Distributed Packet Switching for Local Computer Networks   I recommend that you listen to Metcalfe's talk at the Computer History Museum (5:30-14:30 min). 

To introduce yourself to other options for Thursday's reading,  watch the interview with the developers of the Gypsy Word processing program, Tim Mott and Larry Tesler on the companion website to the book Designing Interactions.  On the same site is an interview with David Liddle, who was the project leader on the development of the Xerox Star, another one of the topics for Thurs reading.  If you decide to work on Liddle and the Star, you should watch his Xerox Star 8010 Final Demo at Xerox Parc from 1998.     

At the end of class, we will review Hacker on pronoun reference (pp. 34-5) and do grammar exercises 12-4 to 12-6 under Grammar at Diana Hacker's online site    
Thurs Dec 9 Read Michael Hiltzik, Dealers of Lightning: Xerox PARC and the Dawn of the Computer Age, on one of the following:  Ethernet (178-193), Bravo and Gypsy--word processing (194-210), Superpaint--graphics (229-241), The Star--office system (242-256, 361-370).  Chose your reading based on your sense of what you can draw on in writing your final paper as well as your interests more generally.   Those writing on question #2 (Did Xerox Blow It), for example, should consider reading both the sections on the Star and on the Ethernet.  (Note:  for those of you who like listening to Hiltzik, the Star sections are 3:30:05-3:43:40 & 5:08:29-5:19:57; the Ethernet sections are 2:37:14-2:50:40).   

As with our discussion last class, we will go over some key points in the reading that may be relevant to your final paper.  Today we will focus on the Xerox Star.  We will supplement Hiltzik (pp. 242-256 & 361-370) by watching the beginning of David Liddle's presentation at Parc in 1998, Xerox Star 8010 Final Demo.  I also recommend learning a bit more about an idea we first considered during Bernard Carlson's visit, Clayton Christensen's notion of disruptive innovation.  If you are interested in learning more during break, see Christensen's book The Innovator's Dilemma

After we go over some key points in the reading during class, you will work on paper #4 in class while I talk to you individually about your plans for the final paper.  


DEC 11-LAST DAY OF CLASSES, DEC 13 READING DAY, EXAM PERIOD DEC 14-21
Tues Dec 14
(10:30-1:15)
Paper #4 on Xerox Parc due at the beginning of the exam time in our regular classroom.  It should be 2-3+ pages, typed and double-spaced, and include at least three in-text cites and a works-cited page.  See Diana Hacker's Research and Documentation Online to review citation formats etc.   See Hacker, for example, on how to reference video clips on your works cited page, and how to cite a book.   Also study carefully the sample paper on her site for how to include headers, titles, etc.   

Chose one of the following questions:  1) Who is the most interesting and/or important figure who worked at Parc and why; 2) after reading about Steve Jobs visit to Parc, write a paper following up on the chapter title for Hiltzik's epilogue:  "Did Xerox Blow It?"  Make sure to cover at least two of the items covered in the reading for Dec 2nd and Dec 9th.  

BRING THE PAPER TO OUR CLASSROOM AT THE BEGINING OF THE SCHEDULED EXAM TIME ON DEC 14th  (10:30am)