Because this essay is a more complex assignment, your responses this time are even more crucial than before. Fortunately, you all have considerable experience now with this process and should be able to provide extensive and helpful feedback.

Here are the questions:

1. Does the paper have a strong thesis that uses strong verbs (not a form of to be, to have, or to do) and builds to a strong point rather than trailing off? Where is it? Is the paper well-organized and unified around the thesis? By the time you have finished reading the essay, do you think you understand the issues your peer has explored? Do you find the argument persuasive?

2. Effective research is key to this assignment. How well does he or she use quotations — setting them up in substantive ways and then applying, extending, and rebutting as needed? Does the writer comment on them at sufficient length? Remember that quotations should almost never appear at the end of a paragraph. Can any of the quotations be cut or shortened? As I have warned, the danger in an assignment such as this one is that the essay can begin to resemble a collage, a patchwork pieced together from the thoughts of others, or the writer can begin to seem like an emcee, constantly introducing other people’s thoughts and then stepping aside. Does the author use scholarly sources to make his or her own points, or does the essay sound as if he or she is simply regurgitating what other people have said? Where does he or she need more commentary? Where is the connection between the quotation and the argument less than perfectly clear? Can you find a rebuttal (which is required, remember)?

3. How well is the essay organized? Is it closed-form or open-form, and does it follow the rules for that form? Is the essay paragraphed properly, with each paragraph focusing on a specific, readily identifiable point, with the paragraphs split in the appropriate places, and with effective transitions creating coherence? If you ever wonder “How did I get here?” or are confused why a particular sentence appears in a particular paaragraph, that usually indicates a coherence problem. Does your peer use subheads? If so, are the subheads helpful?

4. Are there any particular technical mistakes — these include grammar, spelling, format, concision, voice, and error list errors — that the writer makes repeatedly? Identify them. Are there any sentences that you could not understand, or that you had to re-read several times to understand because they were confusingly written? Identify them. If you like, you may suggest an alternative.

5. Is the format of quotations, citations, and the Works Cited or References page correct?

As always, write your responses directly to your peers, not to a third party. Do not respond to each question separately, and do not number your responses. Try to move generally from more substantive issues to more technical ones, rather than proceeding sequentially through the bibliography. You need not answer every one of these questions. Give your attention where it is needed, and use paragraphing to give your response cohesion. Writing responses as all one paragraph is always a bad sign. Make sure that no more than 1/3 of your response focus on grammatical, stylistic, and formatting problems.

As this essay is longer, 450-500 words per response is a reasonable minimum. Bring two copies of each response to class, one copy for your peer and one for me.

Because these essays are more complex, we will devote much of the next-to-last class to a follow-up for this peer response session. Revise your essay based on the responses you received from your peers. Then, on a properly formatted separate page, list five critical comments made by one or more of your peers. Please note which peer offered each criticism (if more than one did, list all of them). Finally, explain how you addressed each of the comments.

My advice is that you choose substantive problems to address in this assignment. For that reason, at most only one of the five comments to which you respond should address grammar, style, or format problems, and in any of those cases, you should correct every instance of the problem. Of course, you need not address any grammar, style, or format problems in this assignment if you prefer.

This follw-up assignment should require only one double-spaced page. Bring two copies to class, one for yourself to work with and take notes on, and the other for me.

The original peer responses will be judged both on the quality of your advice and the completeness of your responses to these questions; your complete set of responses for each essay will receive a single holistic grade (A-F). Outstanding follow-up can result in a bonus of up to 2/3 of a grade to the original peer response grade.

I should not have to mention the penalties for absence, or lateness, or submitting an incomplete draft to your peers at this point.