Review my corrections on your Discipline Awareness Project: Tracing the Path of Scholarship project. Choose one sentence from Part 2 for which I made at least one grammatical or stylistic correction (not a spelling or typographical error). Copy and paste that sentence into a new document, complete with my comment.
Skip down to the next line, then rewrite the sentence in a way that you think addresses the grammatical or stylistic error I pointed out.
Do that a second time.