Patricia Muench

9/28/08

Prof. Lecker

Recognize!

            Russell Simmons once said, “The thing about hip-hop is that it's from the underground, ideas from the underbelly, from people who have mostly been locked out, who have not been recognized.” Hip hop is a culture that developed through Kool Herc, Grandmaster Flash, Grand Wizard Theodore, and many other DJ’s. The exhibit from the Smithsonian Institution called “Recognize”, displays many of the origins from which hip hop developed because the many aspects of hip hop have not been recognized. Throughout the exhibit, the four main aspects of hip hop; graffiti, b-boying, mixing, and rapping; were greatly represented. These aspects were represented through photography, paintings, graffiti, film, poetry, and installion.

            The different photographs taken by David Scheinbaum throughout the exhibit, expressed distinct moments throughout the growth of hip hop culture. His photographs displayed the style of clothing in hip hop, the stance of hip hop performers, the setting of hip hop, and the different musical aspects of hip hop. To see the X-ecutioners was amazing because it showed the group mixing on stage. Then, their style of clothing was sportswear warm-up suits and baseball caps. This photograph really gave me a feel for the hip hop culture. Another photograph that really stood out to me was The Roots picture. I found this picture strange because I don’t normally see in the hip hop culture, someone playing the drum set. It made me recognize that hip hop really needs a percussion section too.  The photography section included some of the facts I knew about hip hop, but it also introduced me to facts I never knew.

            The large canvas paintings by Kehinde Wiley were very attracting to me. These paintings showed off the style of some of the major DJ’s, like Grandmaster Flash. The paintings were very attractive because Wiley made them look very royal and good looking. Also, the colors that Wiley used made the paintings pop out, which made them catch my eye. My favorite painting was of LL Cool J because he was dressed in white, looked classy, and yet had an attitude. This made me look at every single detail in this photo. All of the paintings mixed themes together, which was interesting. Some of the guys in the paintings, were in sportswear, but placed in a royal setting. A great example of this was the painting of Ice T because he was sitting in a king’s chair with a robe, but at the same time, had on a warm-up suit with sneakers and a baseball cap. For me, these large canvas paintings really brought out the hip-hop culture. Because they were in a more royal setting, the styles of the hip hop artists really stood out.

            Graffiti is something I normally see on a train, a street wall, or a truck. When seeing graffiti in an art museum, it made me really focus on what the graffiti was trying to express. The vivid colors that were used made the artwork within the graffiti really stand out. The one that I felt was most eye-catching was the graffiti named CON. To take two totally different themes and mix them together was amazing. The idea of cards mixed with hip hop culture art seemed odd. However, when I looked into each letter and found more artwork, it showed me that graffiti has a lot of detail to it. The kings holding a microphone and a spray can was a very cool concept that I felt would have been hard to pull off. When graffiti is on the street, I would normally ignore it. When I saw the graffiti in this exhibit, it really made me focus on every little detail that goes into painting graffiti.

            The film aspect of the exhibit was a room with a looping video of three shorts. This was my least favorite area of the exhibit because there were too many flashing lights in the video. Jefferson Pinder, the artist of this video, used many neon colors. When I watched these videos, it felt like a was in a disco ball, and the colors hurt my eyes. The concept behind the video was what I enjoyed. The story I liked the most was from the Car Wash Meditations short piece. The way I interpreted the short piece was that someone was listening to music as the world was slowing down around them. They really took in the concept that it was cool to have everything moving quickly around you, while you are moving slowly. After the car wash, then they have to go back into reality again. The background music was the part that expressed hip hop culture the most, and the music did flow smoothly with the video. I felt that the video part of the exhibit should have had more to it.

            Lastly, the poetry and the installation piece, by Nikki Giovanni and Shinique Smith, were truly pieces of art. There were so many meanings behind this part. Within the installion piece, the materials used, mostly came from items that you may have around the house or on the street. The part that really stood out was the collection of pictures that portrayed artists with unexplainable deaths. There was such a deep meaning to that, which also taught me about the hip hop culture, and how those people really affected it. To have the poem linked to the installation piece was also amazing. When the poem talked about having spray cans, and the reasons of why certain colors are chosen, it really helped me understand the situation. It’s not just about those reasons, but much more, of why people choose to make a piece of art such as this. It helped me understand the installation piece when the poem was being read to me. When something was mentioned in the poem, it made my eyes focus on the aspect mentioned. Overall, the meaning behind the installation piece and the poem came from the heart, which expressed a powerful message about hip hop.

            The Recognize Exhibit really pointed out information on the history behind hip hop. This exhibit expressed to me that hip hop is a whole culture within itself with many different aspects to it. It’s not just the mixing, the b-boying, the rapping, or the graffiti. Hip-Hop is something that started from the underground and then up. If this exhibit wasn’t put in the museum, the origins of hip hop probably would have not been recognized by the people of society. This exhibit makes you honor the message that hip hop is trying to express.

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Patricia Muench

Prof. Lecker

9/22/08

Grandmas Rock

            “I never thought about these things for a long time.” was one of the first statements Mary Carlsen said to me (Carlsen 8 September 2008). Mary Carlsen has been through some of the most important events in American History. From the roaring twenties, to the new millenium, she has been surrounded by some of the best and worst times. Some of the events were the assassination of John F. Kennedy, the crashing of the glass Zeppelin from Germany, and World War II. During these times, caring was always a major part of her life. From the moment she was born on June 1st, 1923, she always strived to care for anything and everything.

            Born as Mary Francis Valentine, my grandmother was born at her grandmother’s house in Glendale, NY. During her birth, her mother had placenta previa (Carlsen 9/8/08). Placenta previa is when the placenta gets moved to an improper place in the body, causing the cervix to be blocked. It can cause much bleeding and maybe even death of the baby (“Mayoclinic”). According to Mary’s mother, the doctor told her that she was supposed to deliver a dead baby.  The remarkable fact is that Mary is currently eighty-five years old, standing six feet tall. 

            Growing up was very difficult because Mary’s childhood was during the Great Depression.  It was also hard for Mary’s family because at that time everyone was poor. Everyone became poor because of the stock market crash, which happened on October 27th, 1929. On this date, she was also only six years old. When Franklin D. Roosevelt became president in 1933, the unemployment rate went up from eight million to fifteen million. The Great Depression affected, not just America, but the rest of the world too (“ELRO”).  Even when Mary was in her early years of childhood, she was able to care for something. For example, she would eat a dinner of bread and butter, so that her family would also have something to eat.  Mary knew, at the age of six, that her family wasn’t able to afford much. However, being a child, Mary didn’t understand much of what was happening, and other than what her father told her. Her father always provided her with some type of food to eat and clothes to wear. She had her basic necessities, so she didn’t ask for anything more. Towards the later years of the Great Depression and her teenage years, she also took on a job to make extra cash for the family. Overall, the Great Depression made her have a limited childhood.

            As Mary grew up and went into high school, she was faced with taking care of her mom for about six years. She had to keep her going by giving her the medicine she needed to take. Taking care of her mom, made her decide, that she wanted to become a nurse. After graduating high school, my grandma attended St. John’s University for a year to start nurses classes. After St. John’s University, she went into nurse’s training at St. Catherine’s Nursing School for two and a half years. She then became, at the time right before the end of the war, a nurse in the army for thirteen months. During her time in the army, she was stationed in many different places, but two that examples were Fort Belvar and Atlantic City. When she was stationed in Atlantic City, she helped out at an army hospital. Her patients were mostly blind patients that couldn’t do the basic everyday actions. Some activities that she helped them with were bathing the patients and giving them their medicine. Another problem that many of her patients were dealing with on top of physical injuries was Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder and its effects. To help them cope with this disorder, she would just talk to them, and also listen to their stories just for support, not as a doctor. Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder is a mental disorder that develops after a terrifying experience that  results in physical harm or the threat of physical harm. Suffering from Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder can result in being startled easily, becoming emotionally numb, lose interest in things they used to enjoy, having trouble being affectionate, becoming irritable, becoming more aggressive, and maybe even becoming violent (“NIMH”). She would talk to them, not just because she felt sorry for them, but also because she knew that they needed some support.  She knew that sometimes, post-traumatic stress disorder can be followed with depression, substance abuse, or an anxiety disorder (“NIMH”).  Helping these soldiers cope with this disorder also made her feel good inside. She knew she had done her job when she did more than just what was expected of her. It also felt good to be congratulated by a passing bus when she arrived at her home after her assigned tour. After the war was over, she moved on to be a nurse for twenty one years at St. John’s hospital.

            During her career as a nurse, she developed a passion and love for animals. She started showing her passion towards taking care of animals by helping out her friend Sally at an animal shelter during her work at St. John’s Hospital. She would be able to help out with the animals because the shelter was close to work. She still continues this passion today with helping out animals. She has three cats at her house, but she sometimes provides shelter for stray cats in her garage. Because stray cats come to use her garage as shelter, she ends up feeding them some of the cat food she has in her house. She will especially either help them herself, or find the appropriate help, if she finds a cat that is pregnant or suffering from hunger.  The peak of kitten season is from late April to early September, which is where many unwanted or homeless cats are born. Many shelters around the nation even kill unwanted or abandoned cats at the rate of one per minute (“SPAY”). Because of so many kittens being born, she would definitely take in another cat if she could. Reasons like this are why she tries to take care of the cats as much as she can sometimes, even though she knows not every shelter is like that. Overall, she tries to be a good samaritan with animals, by showing her compassionate side.

            Aside from Mary’s nurse life, she has been through many of the best and worst times of American History. Some examples are World War II, the crashing of the Zeppelin from Germany, the invention of computers, the building of bridges, the assassination of John F. Kennedy, and the horrifying events of September 11th, 2001. One that stands out for her is the Civil Rights Movement that started in 1954. Groups like the Ku Klux Klan made it extremely difficult for black people to get rights at this time. They also made it hard for black people to survive in a regular society. Something that Mary would do towards the end of the movement was allowing black people to sit next to her. She wouldn’t say anything, but she also thought it was wrong when people made comments like, “I’m glad I’m sitting next to you and not one of them.” (Carlsen 22 September 2008) Mary said that a white person said this to her, with “one of them” referring to a black person. Situations on buses with black people were very influential at the time because black people weren’t allowed to sit in the front of the bus with the white people. Until Rosa Parks came, that situations with black people on buses were starting to be resolved. Rosa Parks was an icon for this time during the Civil Rights Movement because she sat in front of the bus, and refused to give up her seat on December 1st, 1955 (“NPR”). Mary would make life easier for people like Rosa Parks to ride a bus. She also worked with many black people that were aides in St. John’s Hospital. She would talk to many of them, but one in particular named Sue. She would talk to her about family and other various topics. She would make a concerted effort to make black people feel comfortable around her. She cared more for them than white people sometimes. Throughout times like this, family became very important to her. Mary would work twice as hard to support her family.

            Family was always an important aspect of Mary’s life. The start of her own family happened on June 1st when she married Raymond Francis Carlsen. Mary has always been very caring, and this is where she started to spread what she learned about caring throughout her life. Mary and Raymond ended up having four children named Christopher, Steven, Claire, and Regina. Mary started off showing that she cared for her children by sending all of them to Catholic school to get a better education. After Mary had her first child Steven, the doctor said that she wasn’t going to be able to have babies because of demitriosis. Mary refused to accept that statement because she cared for Raymond’s wishes of having a big family. Mary was determined to have more children, so she kept going to the doctor for ten years. After all of the consistent doctor visits, she was able to have three more kids; Claire, Christopher, then Regina. Mary did a very nice job at keeping her family happy. For example, my mother Regina burnt her elbow when she was younger. She ran up to the bathroom where Mary was because she knew what to do. Mary was able to bandage her elbow and cleanse it properly. Also for Regina, Mary would take her dolls to the “doll hospital”. Christopher would steal her dolls and put them upside down in the garbage cans, which would break the dolls. Mary said that Regina’s dolls would be back to normal the next day, so she went to the store and just bought brand new dolls. She would never let Regina know that though. Another example can be when Claire got sunburn. Because of the conditions of the sunburn, Mary took her to the hospital. The doctors said to Mary that Claire would need to be in the hospital for a few days, so Mary stayed with her. Chris also had a problem of his own. Because Chris wore glasses, many of the kids at the school would make fun of him. Mary would solve his problem by going to pick him up from school every day so that way the kids wouldn’t bother him. She also signed him up for boxing classes and boy scouts so that he could learn his about his resources, and so that he could learn how to defend himself. Lastly, one of the hardest times for the family was when Raymond, her husband, went on strike for nine months with the telephone company. Mary worked extra hours, along with the help of her mother’s money also, to keep the family supported. With the extra work, Mary was able to provide nice clothes, makeup, toys, and school books for all of her children. Her main focus has always been to keep the family happy.

            As Mary’s children started to have children, her main focus was to make sure their families would live a good life, and that they would have enough money to support their families. According to my mother, Regina, “Grandma is very frugal. She doesn’t use the microwave and other normal appliances. She is very fruitful…and resourceful. If someone had an old t-shirt, she would use it as a rag or something for the house. She taught all my siblings and I how to drive.” (Muench 25 September 2008) Mary is always trying to save money, and use things she already has to accomplish her everyday tasks. This statement proves that Mary reuses the everyday items for a different use every time, and that she tries to save money everywhere she can. Mary provides money to everyone in the family. She gave money to my uncle to refurnish his kitchen. When my cousin David had a drinking problem, she provided money for him to get back on track. Most importantly, since my brother passed away, economic difficulties were made easier because of Mary. She gave my family money, so that we can start to get our lives back on track. Still to this day, Mary realizes that my family doesn’t have enough money to pay for me for college. She is providing as much money as she can for me to go to school. She even paid for my laptop. If there is one memory that everyone can keep in their mind about Mary is that she will always support her family, no matter what.

             As proven by the many occurrences in her life, Mary Francis Carlsen has experienced so much, yet she is able to follow her caring ways. Mary Francis Carlsen showed that she is always looking out for someone or something, whether it is a soldier, a family member, or an animal. Mary Francis Carlsen’s life can be summarized by this quote of Tenneva Jordan, “A mother is a person who seeing there are only four pieces of pie for five people, promptly announces she never did care for pie.” Mary Francis Carlsen will put everyone in her life before herself.

Annotated Bibliography

 

Carlsen, Mary. Personal Interview. 8 September 2008.

            Mary Carlsen is a good source because information for the paper on her is useful when it comes directly from her. She provided many different ways that she cared about during her life. She also provided events that occurred in her life. She provided quotes and specific details about experiences that she had, while caring for others. Overall, Mary Carlsen gave helpful information on a narrative about herself. (Interview #1)

Carlsen, Mary. Personal Interview. 22 September 2008.

            This interview was different because Mary Carlsen gave more information that added to her first interview. She also gave more detail than the first time on topics, such as the Great Depression, her help towards her mom when she was sick, and her caring ways during the Civil Rights movement. Overall, Mary Carlsen gave more explanatory descriptions of the occurrences in her life. (Interview #2)

Civil Rights Icon Rosa Parks Dies. 25 October 2005. National Public Radio. 22 June 2008             http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=4973548

            Information on Rosa Parks that came from this article provided a little bit of background information on why she was such an icon in the Civil Rights Movement. The article explained the period of time by summarizing, after her death, why she was so important, especially for the bus rides for black people in the 1960’s. It helps with the essay because it gives valid information that relates to what Mary Carlsen did for a person on the bus. It helps the reader understand that specific time period.

Muench, Regina. Personal Interview. 25 September 2008.

            Regina was a very helpful person in understanding Mary Carlsen’s story from a different perspective. She provided many details on how well Mary Carlsen was able to care for her family. Because Mary Carlsen is 85 years old, she doesn’t remember certain facts, which is why Regina’s interview was very helpful. She helped me get a better understanding through her perspective, what Mary Carlsen’s life was like.

National Institute of Mental Health. 26 June 2008. National Institutes of Health, a component of             the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services. 22 June 2008    http://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/publications/anxiety-disorders/post-traumatic-stress-          disorder.shtml

            Coming straight from the National Institute of Mental Health, this article provides us with many valid details on post-traumatic stress disorder. It explains its causes and effects of when it occurs in someone’s life. It says that, especially after a war, many soldiers suffer from it. It was able to relate to the situation that the soldiers were going through that Mary Carlsen was helping. Overall, it provides us with many details that support our explanation of Mary Carlsen’s caring ways. (Scholarly Resource #1)

Pet Overpopulation…Are you Guilty?. June 2006. Spay, Inc.. 22 June 2008           http://www.spay.org/guilty.html

            This article shows many facts about caring for animals. Mary Carlsen loves animals, and this helps prove how Mary can be very compassionate with animals. This website tells us many reasons, good and bad, why we should either adopt kittens, or why we should just put unwanted or abandoned kittens to sleep. It relates to Mary Carlsen’s caring ways, especially with the stray cats that live in her garage. Overall, it helps give a better understanding of why Mary Carlsen’s caring ways are so important for cats.

Placenta Previa. Mayo Clinic Staff. 1 June 2007. Mayoclinic.com: tools for healthier lives. 22       June 2008 < http://www.mayoclinic.com/health/placenta-previa/DS00588>

            A health article that provides us with exact details is very helpful for this essay. It provides a little bit more information on what Mary Carlsen’s condition was when she was born. It gives the definition of placenta previa, and what the effects of it are. It gives vivid details, such as saying that when placenta previa occurs, there can be a massive amount of bleeding. Overall, it allows the reader to understand Mary Carlsen’s story.

The Great Depression (1929-1939). 2003. Eleanor Roosevelt National Historic Site. 22 June         2008 http://www.nps.gov/archive/elro/glossary/great-depression.htm

            Mary Carlsen’s childhood was rough, and this article explains how hard it was to live at the time. It also tells us different facts that were proven by Franklin D. Roosevelt. It really paints a picture about how unemployment was really affecting American society economically. It allows us to have a better understanding of the situation of Mary Carlsen’s family. Overall, it shows us, through a famous person’s perspective, what exactly was going on at the time. ( Scholarly Resource #2)

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