Observation notes
9/11/03: Thursday night 7:20pm.
Virginia Doherty
EDRS 812
Key: Normal script denotes what actually was observed.
Italics denote reflection/speculation on what was happening.
Choosing the setting: We looked for an area with a lot of
movement and settled on the 2nd floor of the Johnson Center. At first
we went to the 2nd floor in order to look over the railing and record what
was happening in the food court. But, when we got upstairs, there
was a group of students at a table and we decided to observe them and the
area around them.
Describing the setting: The area serves as a library, with
carrels for computers and stacks for books. I am sitting against
the railing which overlooks the food court, looking towards the open stairway
(white stairs with green metalwork) which goes down to the food court and
up to the 3rd floor. Behind me are more round tables and plush chairs
pushed against the railing. No one is sitting in the chairs in either
direction. To my left is the long rectangular table that we are going to
focus on. More in my direct line of vision are three computer carrels
in a circular formation around a power source pillar and four rows of book
stacks. Julio is directly in my line of vision, seated about 15 feet
from me, along the railing. He is facing the group at the table.
Map:
(hand drawn map of the library setting was
inserted here)
General description of activity: At the carrels I can see a
man and a woman at separate computers. The other computers in view are
not being used because there are no chairs by them. The chairs have
been moved to accommodate a large group at a nearby table. The man
at the computer is wearing a red shirt (almost orange-red) and beige shorts.
He is overweight and balding. He has a green book bag slung over
his shoulder. He is writing intensely. The girl is young, 20ish,
long, straight brown hair, thin and she doesn’t move except her hands.
To my left nine students are around a rectangular table. Six are
sitting and three are standing but their positions keep changing.
The group at the table seems to be doing something that they are all involved
in but I can’t figure out what they are doing. There are no books
around so they are not studying. Two guys get up and others sit down
in their seats. Nancy later said that they were playing cards but
I never saw the cards. It seems like a social group rather than a
study group. They do not seem to be aware of the other people (like
us) around them. The group at the table all have something
blue on. Blue predominates—blue jeans, blue sweatpants, blue jerseys.
Three of the 6 men have head coverings like jersey ski caps. Two
caps are black and the other is gray. The girls have long hair pulled
back. All the girls are thin and dressed in tight jeans and fitted
tops.
As I am reflecting on my notes from that time, I realize that I
didn’t note or mention the age of the men/women around the table.
As I think back, they could have been all about the same age—college age,
or not. I cannot honestly say.
The group is breaking up. All are standing. One man from
the table is moving over to me. He is bringing his chair and puts
it at my table. I think the group is breaking up but they seem to
be changing positions rather than leaving. Another guy from the group
is coming over to my table. He picks up the backpack from a chair
at my left. Neither man made eye contact with me. Everyone
is standing at or near the table. They are slapping each other’s
hand and/or patting each other on the back. Two men are exchanging
backpacks, punching each other on the arm. There is a lot of physical
expression of ___? Friendship? A guy has his arm around a girl but
it seems very friendly, not sexual. . The girl is a native English
speaker. Her clear speech is very cultured, educated. She is
with ‘blue jersey guy’ (short, stocky with very baggy gym shorts). Four
of them (3 guys and a girl) are hanging over the railing in front of me.
They are hissing over the side to someone below. I can hear them
talk and I wonder whether all of them are native English speakers.
One guy speaks with the soft cadence of Caribbean English. I can’t
hear what they are saying but I hear the intonation. Another guy
is speaking to the Caribbean sounding man. I can’t hear if it is
English. It bothers me that I can’t pick out the language.
I am usually good at that. I can’t even offer a guess. I wish
I could hear them more clearly.
Girl and jersey guy just left after signally to someone on the first
floor. They are heading to the stairs to go to the food court.
Six of them are still hanging around.
Red-shirt just got up from the computer. He walked around
the circle of computer carrels and stopped at another one. He started
to sit down but got right up and left by the stairway. He looked
so benign when he was sitting. Standing, he is huge. Not only
is he extremely overweight, but he is tall and big all over.
Black cap guy came back for his backpack which was left on the table.
He sat down across from Nancy. Took out some papers and starts to
read. He is medium height, jean shorts and white running shoes.
New guy is in Red-shirt’s place at the computer. He’s young,
20-ish, bad posture—needs to stand up straight. Too much time hunched
over a computer?
Back at the table, Black-cap is still there and now is joined by
a very flirtatious girl. Thin, long, dark straight hair which she
flings back as a habit. She sits down in a chair in front of him.
He is turned away from the table with his papers on his lap. She
is knee-to-knee facing him. She is trying to get his attention but
even though she is practically on top of him, he is not giving her any
attention. Did they fight? Does she have a reputation?
He is not giving her the attention she wants.
Muscle guy and tall guy just passed me. Muscle guy has very
broad shoulders and trim waist. Other guy is tall, thin, not particularly
in good shape even though he is thin. Both are gesturing a lot as
they pass and walk down the stairs.
Long haired girl at the computer next to Red-shirt is still there
and hasn’t moved.
Black shirt/shoulder bag guy leaving, heading to the stairs.
All the kids seem to have the same kind of school bag: canvas, not
too big and with a long shoulder strap.
How can they study in this atmosphere? There is constant noise
from downstairs, water noise—fountain? The smells are distracting.
There is constant movement. This is a library and yet it is not conducive
to studying—for me. I struggle to concentrate.
Observation ended at 7:35.
Discussion at end of observation: Julio and I were sitting about
20 feet away from each other looking at the table, the center of focus,
from different angles. He commented on what the group was doing at
the table and that he was very aware that they knew they were being watched.
I was not aware of that. He talked about numbers in his description.
He was aware of exactly how many were seated at specific times. His
description was full of quantities and exactitudes.
Nancy noted movement and more details about what was going on at
the table. She saw that some of them were playing cards when we first
arrived. I had not seen that. She also noted comings/goings
of group members which were slightly beyond my range of vision.
When there was just the one man left at the table and he was joined
by the young lady with the long hair, Nancy noted much more about their
interaction since she was at the same table as they.
Xiou noted the physicality of the group and used words which were
stronger than the ones I would have used. She used punched when I
used slapped. She may have seen more aggression in the physicality
than I did. She also noted the clothing and the hairstyles more than
the rest of us, I think.
As I reflect on the discussion after the observation, I realize
that we didn’t look at each others’ notes. I don’t know how the other
members of our group recorded their notes.
What I learned about observations:
1. I should have read the instructions about the observation exercise
again before the actual observation. My observation remained in #3
and didn’t progress to #4 which was to focus on one thing in the general
area. I felt rushed to record everything that was happening everywhere.
2. The area that I chose was too big. I should have concentrated
on a smaller physical area and recorded more details. I focused on
large movement and took the group as a whole rather than concentrating
on individuals and smaller movement.
3. I needed a focus ? something specific to be looking at.
It would be easier to look at behavior or movement or people but not all
of that together. So much was happening around the table and at the
carrels that I found myself fragmented. My eyes were focusing on
the whole area but I was writing about what was going on at the table and
not getting it all down because I was registering other movements.
I also found that I realized that I could have focused on language (my
main interest) as well as movement.
4. I feel that I should have asked permission of the group to observe
them. Once I sat down and started to record their movements, I felt
that I couldn’t look at them directly because they would have noticed that
they were being observed. If I had been up-front with them, I would
have felt more comfortable recording their movements.
5. I felt that I needed a form to fill out in order to be more organized
with my note taking. I am still thinking about what kind of form
would have been helpful and haven’t come up with anything but there must
be an easier way to record observations.
6. A way to make this exercise more useful is to request another
observation (singular, not in a group) to practice what was learned the
first time. I feel that I didn’t do a good job recording and will
probably have to do it many times before I get my own system.
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