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1. Great point and clear thesis, but it seems to be the thesis for the research paper. This paper is intended to address the question of the importance of research on second language instruction to educational leaders' decision-making. 2. There are some great points embedded in here, but I'd like to see them come out more clearly. I see two inter-related points: 1) the rights get ignored because school districts experience the shift in demographics in different places at different times--so they need to learn all over again; and 2) if administrators are ignorant and don't act, then students' rights will be violated. Good, now can you make those points more explicitly and tie them to an argument that advocates the use of research in this area. I think you are closer to what I have in mind in the next paragraph. My next question is: What do administrators do once they recognize the problem? 3. The court case may not have, but I thought there was a set of rules created by the Office of Education in response to the Lau ruling. I did this reading many years ago, but my recollection is that the rules are quite specific about what school districts are required to provide. I suspect that was the process and Castaneda v. Pickard speaks more to the product. 4. Prop. 227 says one year of bilingual education, but if there is a limit on second language instruction, it is longer than that. I think the limit may be four years, but that part may have been struck down because it would be in conflict with other education law. I'm guessing and I cannot remember anymore.* 5. OK, but haven't you really argued that it is both? Why raise all the legal issues if that's not the point? It seems to me that the argument ought to be that administrators should keep themselves out of legal trouble and that the values embedded in the legal decisions are basic to our country's espoused educational philosophy and worth pursuing. You've done a nice job with this paper., but I do have the impression that you struggled a bit. It seems to me that you are not yet entirely clear about which aspects of the research you have been doing is important to school leaders. It seems logical to me that they need to know the law and have the best interests of all students at heart. I think you said that rather well in the concluding paragraph, but those kinds of arguments need to be made throughout the paper. Your basic arguments need to be made in the thesis, then pulled all the way through paper to the conclusion. |
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* The fundamental goal of Proposition 227 was to restrict the use of the home language in instruction in the public schools. The idea was that the use of the home language to teach English did not help the students gain proficiency in English. In effect, it kept the children from learning English in a reasonable time. The prime way to get around this law was to get a waiver. If enough students in a school were granted a waiver to form a bilingual class, that school could continue with bilingual education. Otherwise schools were given one year to transition the children. It was not one year of bilingual education. It was one year where the instruction was 'overwhelmingly in English' or 'structured English immersion'. The interpretationof 'overwhelmingly in English' was open to interpretation by the individual schools. ( Bilingual Research Journal. Retreived from http://bru.asu.edu/v2412/articles/ar4/html) |