Things to Ponder...

Personal experience


Some references to sex and similar topics kind of made me uncomfortable. At times I clicked on a certain choice expecting one thing but getting something completely unrelated. After a while, it got aggravating because it felt like the same things were coming up over and over again and I was going around in circles. I also kept hoping I’d finally get to the index but for some reason I didn’t.

The interface:

I think the options that are given to you don’t always relate to what you might choose. Some confused me and after a while I gave up trying to find meaning and just clicked random ones. It got exasperating after some time.

Language use:

I think a lot of it was interesting and caught my attention. The choice of some facts and quotes was interesting and some stories were humorous. The writer definitely intrigues the reader. Additionally, as a reader, I was disappointed because I was hoping for some kind of conclusion and never really discovered what it was.

Which way to go: 

I think if one starts with reading the introduction and finding the index, it can help guide the reader through the website. Although the chaos is still present, some kind of structure helps. 
For readers that can’t work without structure at all, the index helps you somewhat put things together.

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